tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.comments2023-12-24T07:03:54.887-04:00Oasis Writing Link™Cynthia Pittmannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12656761837022197235noreply@blogger.comBlogger2668125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-23956487355045567542022-09-06T12:35:27.466-04:002022-09-06T12:35:27.466-04:00Yes, Brad. Two documentary films were in the works...Yes, Brad. Two documentary films were in the works but they haven{t gone forward.Cynthia Pittmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12656761837022197235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-24302437389279680602022-09-06T11:17:51.601-04:002022-09-06T11:17:51.601-04:00Thank you for these tips. I think they would help ...Thank you for these tips. I think they would help the writer a lot, specially number 7 since it would help the writer understand the point of view of other people while reading. Valeria Fleitesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-47025015734183467382022-09-06T11:16:44.201-04:002022-09-06T11:16:44.201-04:00Thank you for these tips. I think they would help ...Thank you for these tips. I think they would help the writer a lot, specially number 7 since it would help the writer understand the point of view of other people while reading. Valeria Fleitesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-63672922078785015512022-09-06T11:13:41.798-04:002022-09-06T11:13:41.798-04:00Alexandra Arroyo INGL 3103-128
This tips are reall...Alexandra Arroyo INGL 3103-128<br />This tips are really helpful. As soon as I read I knew that I am going more to the summary and pointing methods. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-626124897814382022-09-06T11:13:32.426-04:002022-09-06T11:13:32.426-04:00these are very helpful tips, I like how well organ...these are very helpful tips, I like how well organized they are and the descriptions of each one. verry concrete and straight forward sara abreunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-32484576341122590942022-09-06T11:13:18.557-04:002022-09-06T11:13:18.557-04:00I find the tip#1 very helpful because the most of ...I find the tip#1 very helpful because the most of the time we don't comprehend what we are reading until we read it outloud and organice our thoughts.Naomi Ortiznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-13017576606868135212022-09-06T11:13:14.491-04:002022-09-06T11:13:14.491-04:00Jaymie L. Vázquez INGL3103
“Write the words or phr...Jaymie L. Vázquez INGL3103<br />“Write the words or phrases that stick in your mind.” When writing we try to get people to remember what we write and therefore make it stick. While accomplishing it with writing, it also helps with giving feedback. Therefore the first things that we remember after reading can be something to give feedback on. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-843837088443050822022-09-06T11:12:33.680-04:002022-09-06T11:12:33.680-04:00#9 I agree with almost all the tips, I think givin...#9 I agree with almost all the tips, I think giving positive feedback to a writer encourages better writing without being so pragmatic.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-1919316109174560672022-09-06T11:12:13.586-04:002022-09-06T11:12:13.586-04:00I believe that tip #3 is important when writting a...I believe that tip #3 is important when writting a comment because you can show the author what caught your attention. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-58512481861073753492022-09-06T11:11:44.064-04:002022-09-06T11:11:44.064-04:00Sofía Berríos
This is really helpful for me to im...Sofía Berríos <br />This is really helpful for me to improve my work when writing and when giving a constructive comment to others. I usually use tips #3 and #5. Thank you for the advice. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-8448922039870401662022-09-06T11:11:15.002-04:002022-09-06T11:11:15.002-04:00Sofía Berríos
This is really helpful for me to im...Sofía Berríos <br />This is really helpful for me to improve my work when writing and when giving a constructive comment to others. I usually use tips #3 and #5. Thank you for the advice. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-84510372411807750692022-09-06T11:11:10.252-04:002022-09-06T11:11:10.252-04:00I really like how well structured the post is. It ...I really like how well structured the post is. It provides a story about the topic that can relate to some readers and also relates to the topic at hand. The language used in the post is perfect for the average user with not-so-hard words that can bother some readers. Overall, good job!<br />-OrlandoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-39729483261631190562022-09-06T11:11:06.612-04:002022-09-06T11:11:06.612-04:00Natali Aboukheir ENGLISH 3103-128
My reaction to ...Natali Aboukheir ENGLISH 3103-128<br /><br />My reaction to the blog is warming. I like the energy it radiates and I find the types of feedback stated greatly helpful for my academic career as a student in this college institution.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-65969421147122729972022-09-06T11:10:25.438-04:002022-09-06T11:10:25.438-04:00Amanda Lacomba INGL 3103-128
I found these tips ve...Amanda Lacomba INGL 3103-128<br />I found these tips very useful, especially the tenth because I hadn't considered it as an option before and in school what you're mostly taught is to simply react to what the author said and not necessarily make any new suggestions. That said, I would very much appreciate tips on how to react to other people's feedback to our writing. For example, how to respond to harsh or ambiguous criticism.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-48599110836079063802022-09-06T11:09:08.421-04:002022-09-06T11:09:08.421-04:00Well I really like the idea of giving people ideas...Well I really like the idea of giving people ideas and helping them on how they can properly give someone feedback on their work. It is really helpful and will help me learn on how to comment on someone’s work. I will make sure to use all these tips in future work-Diego García Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-55134848709249928962022-09-06T11:08:43.387-04:002022-09-06T11:08:43.387-04:00I really liked #9 believing and doubting, because ...I really liked #9 believing and doubting, because it is a great way to interact with the writing and gives the writer another perspective about what he wrote. <br />- Ian Jiménez Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-43545337081741879532022-09-06T11:06:38.631-04:002022-09-06T11:06:38.631-04:00I believe that this was the most helpful article o...I believe that this was the most helpful article on giving helpful feedback and believe she hit all the key points.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-36694941407230486212022-09-06T09:35:54.559-04:002022-09-06T09:35:54.559-04:00I really enjoyed this text about commenting. It re...I really enjoyed this text about commenting. It really gives a new perspective on how to comment. I really love the title for number 10 (Movies of the mind). It really helped me visualize the point. I wish it could go more into detail with the say back (Number 2). Overall I think my favorites are the say back, movies in the mind and the center of gravity. -Alexander Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-71424244766446960812022-09-06T09:35:47.276-04:002022-09-06T09:35:47.276-04:00This tips are very helpful and encouraging for peo...This tips are very helpful and encouraging for people to write there own opinions on a matter more civil and polite. I personally like #3 and #5 since sometimes one sentence can go more into depth or can stick out more than the whole paragraph.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-23809922513147819472022-09-06T09:32:39.835-04:002022-09-06T09:32:39.835-04:00Jonás López Rojas (Eng 3103-129)
All these techni...Jonás López Rojas (Eng 3103-129) <br />All these techniques are very helpful for giving feedback. These simple steps helps us understand the importance of writing and to work around it if we find it hard. Following the steps, we can find that it simplifies the hard things we see in our writing. I find that the most helpful tip’s shown here are the #2 “sayback” because it helps oneself out and it also helps a classmate to have a better structure while writing. Another step that helps tremendously is #10, tell about your movie, what’s happening in your head and what will shape your writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-66804836059825989372022-09-06T09:32:36.173-04:002022-09-06T09:32:36.173-04:00Its good to to say whatever its on your mind.Its good to to say whatever its on your mind.Pedro Alemannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-48449708730296839582022-09-06T09:32:10.993-04:002022-09-06T09:32:10.993-04:00Sometimes when we are writing we get too involved ...Sometimes when we are writing we get too involved in the process. In order to do a better writing feedback is needed. The tips presented above are really helpful. I find tip #10 very useful . Movies of the Mind, this tell the writer what happens inside your head as you read the words in the blog. Explaining your thoughts in a roughly way can give the writer a better perspective of its writing. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-43716050486327343702022-09-06T09:32:10.396-04:002022-09-06T09:32:10.396-04:00Sometimes when we are writing we get too involved ...Sometimes when we are writing we get too involved in the process. In order to do a better writing feedback is needed. The tips presented above are really helpful. I find tip #10 very useful . Movies of the Mind, this tell the writer what happens inside your head as you read the words in the blog. Explaining your thoughts in a roughly way can give the writer a better perspective of its writing. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-16331324753603226272022-09-06T09:31:50.535-04:002022-09-06T09:31:50.535-04:00“Most of us have experienced that situation where ...“Most of us have experienced that situation where a reader's feedback was tough and caused us to stop writing for a while.” This is true and not just in life.Daniel Pruna 3103-129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261918990960241225.post-87968614112358469932022-09-06T09:30:13.702-04:002022-09-06T09:30:13.702-04:00I liked how there are different ways to give prope...I liked how there are different ways to give proper feedback and how these will help me give good feedback in the future.Ruben Bajandanoreply@blogger.com